Love Within

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Love Within (Pantoum)

It’s the love within her

That makes our world turn.

She feels stronger, richer

When we return.

 

Makes our world turn,

When we call, she is not at her best.

When we return,

She holds us closer to warm her nest.

 

When we call, she is not at her best.

Our names and who we are, away flash

As she needs us closer to recall her nest.

A long distance call made with wishes, done in a dash

 

Our names and who we are, near flash

When she hears, here we are!

A long distance call made with wishes, done in a dash

Tears in her eyes, scar.

 

When she hears, here we are!

Her heart beats a memoir, she smiles.

Tears in her eyes, scar.

As she senses our trails on her shining tiles.

 

Her heart beats a memoir, she smiles.

She feels stronger, richer

As she feels our trails on her shining tiles.

It’s love within her!

 

©️Kalida’s Corner

4 Comments

    1. Kalida AK

      Yey Phil 🙂Thank You! I particularly enjoy repetition & rhyming in Pantoum formats! This is my first poem with this traditional format which compelled me to write more and try other forms as well. I truly appreciate your feedback 🙂 I’m trying my best to share more as I complete crafting my site.

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